Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There has been a dramatic increase in poverty in some developing and under developing countries. It is undeniable that every nation faces poverty at some point of time however, they have their own methods to address the issues.
Poverty is one of the pressing issue these days. Illiteracy, unemployment, over population, political instability and unstable economic conditions are few factors that had contributed immensely to poverty. Moreover, the privation can be mitigated by providing health service, education and employment.
It is often seen in many countries that the people are reluctant to send the children to schools and where they remain as illiterates. As their financial condition is below the poverty line they indulge their children in some paid work which resulted in illiteracy. The lower-class children must be provided with free education and award scholarships for their higher studies.
The government can play a pivotal role in providing employment to eradicate poverty. The administration should offer vocational training for the unemployed educates who cannot afford to get a skilled job.
For instance, due to the greedy leadership in major areas the politicians are more interested in their own wellbeing and maintaining luxurious lives. They were not bothered about the nation's progress and people betterment. Likewise, this implies to unstable financial conditions where the nations welfare is not being considered because of gradual increase in non-taxable income.
Over population plays a crucial role in the downfall of resources and depletion in geographical standards by which the free services cannot be supplied to most of the population. Instead the government educate the people about family planning. To exemplify this, they can bring awareness using social media and give slogans like “One or none”.
To sum up, many countries have poverty challenges as they have economic, geographical and political aspects which need to be improved. The poor is to be supported in the needy aspects for their minimal existence and moreover they should be provided employment based on their skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57012195122 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93422433396 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4219012251 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164166646356 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461349738864 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296078886751 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731611087174 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324885447205 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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