You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir,
I am John, former student of your college. I am writing this letter with regards to the vacancy of a flat in our apartment where I want to give to a student for rental. I would be grateful if you could arrange a tenant for the vacant room.
In the past there used to be very few houses in our college surroundings; because, our institute is far from city. But, now with the increasing in student strength there is gradual improvement in the surrounding areas. Amongst them I have my own apartment a kilometer far from our college, near RS cross road which is opposite to central plaza.
The building is recently constructed which is a 10-floored apartment consisting of 3-bedroom flats in each stair. It has a single room pent house at the top floor of building which is fully furnished. This room is having a bathroom attached and spacious balcony with a swinging chair hanged to the roof.
I am looking for a student who can occupy this room for rent. I have some conditions for the person going to share this room. The tenant must be polite person and a non-smoker. Additionally, he should not have frequent guests and parties. I am sure that the student will feel comfortable in this accommodation.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours Sincerely,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67826086957 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69234018136 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4820098366 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273710577935 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080814090326 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558350563325 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127695311288 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913245310281 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.