Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Modern advancements in present technology altered the approach of communication with one another. This essay will discuss about how human relations are bonded whole over the world with help of social media and the impact of latest technology on our life’s.
Communication is the best medicine to strengthen any relation. However, in olden day we don’t even have telephone to communicate with others in different locations which is due to under-development of social media. In present generation we can communicate with someone we never met before. Even though, this might not be the face-to-face interaction, at-least we are able to keep up friendships virtually. Social media such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter are providing a gateway to strengthen relationship between family and friends even they live in different parts of the world. For example, a person staying in Canada may not be able to visit his parents daily, but he can make conference chat or a video call by means of Whatsapp and Facebook which satisfies his family and they feel his presence.
Overall, this new phenomenon has enormous benefits wherein we are welcoming individuals from different cultures and accepting their friendship. Whereas in the past our ancestors were not is a position to accept friends from different groups. But with the development of online media there is a huge change in society and we can connect with others in different corners of world, which shows that we all are same even born and brought up differently. For example, several people from other countries are connecting on a single path through Facebook groups and sharing their knowledge and experiences.
In conclusion, the web has changed our interactions forever, making the world a global village where people can freely chat and form lasting connections and this essay takes this as a positive note which is uniting citizens of the world together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ultures and accepting their friendship. Whereas in the past our ancestors were not is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24919093851 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409559444 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3812968197 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149923369573 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506641131545 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400101033894 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100828559966 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353626892054 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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