A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honor, kindness, and trust no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that, an individual value is given based on their financial status and expensive brands they use in their day-to-day life. Moreover, our cultural values are not being followed which seems unimportant. I agree with that because, with the change in generations there started gradual adoption of western culture and the recent generations need to be educated about old-fashioned values.
It is clear that we are living in materialistic era these days which is proven by giving value to an individual based on their social status. A person is being judged based on the high-end cars they own or property they have. Due to the influence of western life style, many tend to give importance based on how much they are earning. Moreover, minimum ethics are not in practice and the person who is kind and trust worthy being treated as foolish beings. For example, few days back I attended a marriage celebration where many big shots were invited, I have noticed that they are treated as if they were their own relatives and the average person is not at all being considered by anyone.
In this context, parents must take in to prior notice that their children need awareness on our traditions, values and customs where in kids should practice as part of their daily routine. As our old-fashioned values being ignored by adults, our children are not able to sense the flavor of ancient traditions. It helps them in developing as a great citizen and gives hope for future generations. For example, it is known to everyone that no one is a better teacher when compared with parents. So, it is proven that knowledge and values taught by parents are the best.
In conclusion, we can say that development in technology should not lead us to forget our values and customs. A person cannot be rated based on their material standards and living conditions. Every individual need to take into practice and adolescents need to known about our ethics. A valued and best child will be a great citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84256559767 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60662921999 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545189504373 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3501790757 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153091481736 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522513220939 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388504910637 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945983834059 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225370811701 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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