In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance.
what are the causes of this phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
In this competitive world there is an abundant increase in the usage of harmful steroids to revamp the performance of sportsmen in many professional sports. The causative factor for this phenomenon is because of the pressure the athletes have to progress their career in young age and the most viable solution to this is to perform health checkup and to ban the sports persons if sentenced to any perilous drugs.
The primary cause for the consumption of these detrimental substances is subjected in most young players because of the fact that, they cannot survive without any support in this competitive world. Although, many sports men have the stamina, to win in their respective fields they are forced by many authorities for the intake of steroids for the sake of their brand value. For instance, it has been shown in a survey by Times of India that 45% of the country’s athletes are forced to consume banned steroids to out-perform and represent their country’s pride.
The long-term solution for this predicament is that the government need to take an initiative to restrict the usage of such perilous drugs by placing a cease on substances along with the ban those sportsmen into sports. This should include a drop test which describes the amount of drugs intake by the players. For example, a similar initiative was taken by Australian government and a cricket player was banned through out his life from sports which resulted in the decrease of 60% usage of such substances.
In conclusion, we can say that career plays an imperative role for everyone, but, it is significant to take care of your life sustainability. Thus, instead of wavering to reach great heights and ruining health by many players, government should take serious actions by conducting annual drug tests, to overcome these impediments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Line 9, column 413, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ernment and a cricket player was banned through out his life from sports which resulted in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1059602649 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83228743452 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7014051291 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208764634933 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820421266974 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059366603904 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125701196162 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755150041594 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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