Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that extra-circular activities like music, arts and drama are prominent for students at their elementary level when compared to their class syllabus. I strongly agree with this statement because this helps children in developing their innovative skills from their childhood and relieves them from their curriculum stress levels.
It is significant for every student to be involved in other activities apart from their subjects like Mathematics and Science by which they can improve their innovative skills. Moreover, it is beneficial for children to communicate with others while they participate in drama or singing. This rejuvenate kids with new thoughts and build confidence to prove themselves in their interested skill set. According to the recent survey it is proven that, students who are actively involved in fine arts are less porn to vitamin deficiency diseases.
In this hectic and busy schedule of educational system students are stressed out with their studies by which they are encountered to many illnesses. If at least an hour per day is spent on these arts can help them to free from stress. This makes them healthy and likely to spend tension free time with their family and friends instead daily working on subjects. For example, The Universal Health Organization declared that adolescents participating in music sessions are free from stress and there is a considerable growth in their IQ levels.
In conclusion, extra-curricular courses which improves kid’s social knowledge and relaxes from their stressful classes should be encouraged. Hence, it is beneficial for their physical and mental growth. It is recommended for schools that the music, arts and drama should be a part of student’s curriculum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they are encountered to many illnesses. If at least an hour per day is spent on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41605839416 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90952604164 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8025485854 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106025083223 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460564835668 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530400210235 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727555341438 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187773090991 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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