Some people think that governments should invest more in public services instead of wasting money on arts such as music and paintings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, government is spending enormous parts of its budget not only in public services, but also the arts which promotes or cultural heritage and integrity. Although, I agree that investing huge amount in public streamlining is crucial for a country's development; but, by this I do not think that spending money on arts such as painting and music is waste of funds.
To Embark on, there are plethora of challenges being faced with the insufficient funding of government into public services. First and foremost, the crucial sectors are such as hospitals, schools, roads and others which determines quality of life. For instance, if the medical and hospital services are not provided with proper funding, the medical condition of society may become perilous. Similarly, if the government does not spend enough amount to schools, children's education may decline. Also, the poor are the one who gets affected the most due to the crisis if government do not spend enough fund in public services.
When it comes to consideration of arts and entertainment which attains visibility in world’s competition which promotes culture of our nation. It is difficult to run arts institutions and generate profits without reasonable investment from government. Moreover, arts give pleasure and impacts on quality of one’s life. So, help of government for these institutions needed, by which they can offer fun and relaxation to public.
To sum up, there are clear benefits for both the public services and arts as well which influence the well-being of an individual. Absolutely, public services are crucial in this current situation, because these are the one which makes our life and living better. Finally, government should offer better investments in public sectors by which public gets help to some extent in their critical needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30375426621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81863741667 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3373044422 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2528872653 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829236778955 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728903528865 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158016469548 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697747936155 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.