Some people think that governments should invest more in public services instead of wasting money on arts such as music and paintings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, government is spending enormous parts of its budget not only in public services, but also the arts which promotes or cultural heritage and integrity. Both of these sectors are major inclusions to society in many aspects. Although, I agree that investing huge amount in public streamlining is crucial for a country's development; but, by this I do not think that spending money on arts such as painting and music is waste of funds.
To Embark on, there are plethora of challenges being faced with the insufficient funding of government into public services. First and foremost, the crucial sectors are such as hospitals, schools, roads and others which determines quality of life. For instance, if the medical and hospital services are not provided with proper funding, the medical condition of society may become perilous. Similarly, if the government does not spend enough amount to schools, children's education may decline. Also, the poor are the one who gets affected the most due to the crisis if government do not spend enough fund in public services.
When it comes to consideration of arts and entertainment which attains visibility in world’s competition which promotes culture of our nation. It is difficult to run arts institutions and generate profits without reasonable investment from government. Moreover, arts give pleasure and impacts on quality of one’s life. So, help of government for these institutions needed, by which they can offer fun and relaxation to public.
To sum up, there are clear benefits for both the public services and arts as well which influence the well-being of an individual. Absolutely, public services are crucial in this current situation, because these are the one which makes our life and living better. Finally, government should offer better investments in public sectors by which public saved to some extent in their critical needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29605263158 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81034273991 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8423845392 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247892689446 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779095640327 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743617902352 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151327504683 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059988852633 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.