You relocated to an overseas country recently and shipped your furniture and other possessions through a shipping company. When you received them, you found some of them got damaged. Write a letter to the delivery manager of the shipping company:
• when and where the shipment was
• describe the damages
• what you want the shipment company to do.
Dear Sir,
I am John and writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction towards you shipping service provided. I recently relocated from India to Canada on November 20th; moreover, we opted your company for shipment service which ended up in vain.
Once after receiving all the furniture, we opened the sealed boxes to arrange them in all the room. But to our astonishment, we found all the stuff was damaged to a maximum extent. Some of the expensive appliances such as oven, dining table, ceramic appliances were broken; moreover, we cautioned you to more careful about the exquisite glass painting. Even that was totally a disaster.
I made a call to your office and raised a serious concern towards the loss made by your shipment company, and demanded for compensation. But, the response was not at all supportive which made me even more annoying. At any cost I want your company to take a serious consideration on this and revert your mistake. In case of negligence, I will file a case in the consumer court afterwards you should face the consequences.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... stuff was damaged to a maximum extent. Some of the expensive appliances such as oven, dini...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95287958115 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81379396434 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8954640182 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190972105989 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580068606735 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455450205374 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10670507449 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337475654778 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.