Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of
society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that parents are the best educators for children to mold them in to great citizens of society. While others would argue that school is the best environment to make them educated and shape their future. I strongly believe that mother and father are the best mentors to guide their children in moral values and lead best path. However, teachers in schools mainly concentrate on their curriculum where children learn subject related skills rather than ethics.
As we all know that parents are the best teachers, moreover, they teach ethical values to their children from their childhood to grow up in to legible members of society. It is undeniably true that the habits and behavior taught by parents are being followed by their children. Their progression in career depends on the knowledge they imbibe from their parents and family. I believe that it is imperative for a parent to teach their child the righteous perspective toward society at the beginning. For example, it has been proven that 80% of the children listen to their parents and try to imitate their actions in many instances.
Even though schools play and pivotal role in every student’s life, they focus more on teaching technical skill and share subject knowledge. Because of the increasing number of corporate schools in present time the is a tremendous diminish in teaching ethics to children in schools. This greatly impacts children in knowing culture and values of our country to groom up their future. For example, in a survey by TOI it has been shown that 20% of the students who are having profound knowledge towards their subject are not at all bothered about knowing ethics because of improper guidance.
In conclusion, we can say that it is significant for all the parents to tech their children about being honest, diligent and sincere in what they do to grow in to appreciable citizens of fellowship. While it is important for schools to teach both technical skills and moral values to mold their careers. Finally, I say that parents are best tutors for children in every step of their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'lead the best'.
Suggestion: lead the best
...uide their children in moral values and lead best path. However, teachers in schools main...
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Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...n their curriculum where children learn subject related skills rather than ethics. A...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ical skill and share subject knowledge. Because of the increasing number of corporate s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96317280453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51619955128 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495750708215 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0692653832 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279502704077 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107153860188 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377231069139 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180504319952 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514623288052 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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