Some people think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Some would argue that inhabitants are accountable for maintaining their surroundings neat and pristine. While other say that the authorities are answerable to keep the nation clean and tidy. I strongly believe that every individual is responsible to keep the society unblemished because maintenance of healthy environment is everyone’s duty.
On the one hand, it is imperative for all the pupil to indulge in keeping the Earth’s atmosphere and surroundings tidy. Every action should start from within ourselves and each person need to contribute for the sake of sustaining happy and healthy life. For example, The Swachh Bharath Campaign was a huge success wherein many youngsters and elderly citizens participated in this which motivated many masses. However, I believe that “Little drops make the mighty Ocean”, so only the Government cannot be solely managing the garbage flow.
On the other hand, the bureaucrats can penalize the people making the surroundings untidy, so that it can give a temporary solution. But charging fine from public can only stop fewer fellowmen to change their mindset. However, the foremost purpose is to assist government in conserving the polluting environment. For instance, in a survey by GHMC said that only 20% of surroundings are taken immense care by officials as they are less in number and the remaining 80% is in dwellers hands to keep it clean. I recommend the pupil should reckon about the repercussions to tackle the situation of being untidy.
I conclusion, the planet is being depleted at a staggering rate, so public must take the responsibility to maintain well-kept nation. As the ration of officials and common citizens are not proportional it will be hard to combat the issue. I strongly propel that it is everyone’s duty to maintain a healthy environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...n immense care by officials as they are less in number and the remaining 80% is in dwellers ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31849315068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1019363773 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2643170894 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216827939376 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675661576056 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614113255846 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128746255827 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782549479761 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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