You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear James,
How are you? Last time when you wrote you were asking about a local news story in our country. So, I will fill you with a dramatic scam which made major cities of the country to become more cautious.
As many people tend to get money effortless, which results to hasty circumstances, however the one who showed enthusiasm towards the company’s scheme got drowned which lead to a gigantic scam. The scheme is about investing less amount and benefiting high interest rate monthly. However, majority were overwhelmed towards this trap. This profitable scheme got spread across major cities which made the crowd curious towards spiking their investments. Finally the day has arrived for the scheme to end up as a scam and the company got vanished with it’s roots. The employs got absconded where no one were left with any clue.
The people were curious to know about the key role’s played in this as many were offended and there are some political aspects which involved in this stratagem.
To recapitulate this I was also anxious to gather critical information about the incident, somehow it relates to me because a neighbor of mine invested in it and driven into a corner which made me to react personally.
Hope you are great, see you soon.
Best Wishes,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ious towards spiking their investments. Finally the day has arrived for the scheme to e...
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Line 6, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...played in this as many were offended and there are some political aspects which i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94063926941 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55177205619 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.329066827 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2307692308 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998059055192 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380871880739 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381643701073 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612621380924 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049084280726 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.