You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear James,
How are you doing? Hope you are doing well. How is you new job? And congratulations for being promoted to Sr. Manager. As you are eager to know about the flashing news in India and would like to give you some interesting information about the recent elections held here.
Mr. Shekar got elected as a new Chief minister of our state who has won with the highest majority of votes. I hope he is the first youngest CM for our state ‘Telangana’. He is a diligent politician moreover, his humongous fame all over the country made him be in this position now.
Everyone are curious of the election results as we have many political parties for each region. As, youngsters are ardent followers of this pragmatic thoughts they hope that he would be the right person to rule them and many of the individual’s wish he will be the one to win this.
I am personally interested in this news because I am really impressed by our new CM’s attitude. However, everyone was vexed with the past ruling party and are eager in each aspect of the current elections. Now, all are exhilarating for this out-bursting outcome.
I hope this will give you a clear idea on the news. Waiting for your comment for the same.
Thanking You,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[10]
Message: The pronoun is must be used with 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...you doing? Hope you are doing well. How is you new job? And congratulations for be...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Chief) must be used with a third-person verb: 'ministers'.
Suggestion: ministers
... Mr. Shekar got elected as a new Chief minister of our state who has won with the highe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...m be in this position now. Everyone are curious of the election results as we h...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73755656109 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87014113252 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628959276018 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9928380074 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4375 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8125 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132207789188 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418991754481 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341651426585 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747147878939 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410662221401 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.