You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the student identification card which I lost yesterday. However, I need the card to be issued to the earliest because this leads me to face many challenges.
I already raised a concern with respect to this at the college office and they informed that it will take 2 to 3 weeks to get a new ID card. There are several reasons why I need a new card by the end of this week.
I use train to travel daily and my monthly pass is about to expire in this week. It requires my student ID card for renewal. Secondly, the security guard doesn’t allow me into the college premises where I need to take temporary pass and approval from the college department until I was issued with a new card. The most important challenge is that my 2’nd semester exams are approaching in the next week. Moreover, I will be in need of borrowing reference books from our college library. In this situation I may not get them without my identification proof which affects my studies.
Hence, I request you to issue a new identification card as soon as possible. Please consider my situation and do the needful.
Yours Sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5980861244 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74606969849 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9830387777 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9230769231 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284024123085 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102009993172 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077361463179 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170513570145 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456185624275 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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