The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
In the era of globalization many customers are being influenced by the increasing trends; moreover, they are trying to imitate latest fashion. I completely agree with this idea and believe that society is more conscious especially in clothing and gadgets.
In this pragmatic world, everyone is enthusiastic in upgrading to latest fashion; besides, being influenced by popular personalities. Every individual has access to every brand of cosmetics, clothing and gadgets; besides, online shopping sites are making this even more easier. Most of the youngsters are interested in following celebrities fashion and try to match their attire which is a perpetual process.
On the other hand, most of us follow their footsteps in purchasing gadgets, cosmetics and even more copy their hairstyle. Despite of the fact, that the consumer goods being highly expensive because of magnificent branding, even then many are passionate about them because these are already being followed by famous superstars. Example, many are afraid of being out of fashion, because they fell that people around them may feel worthless and segregate them as out dated personalities.
On a high note, mobiles and watches which were being advertised by popular stars are on huge demand. Everyone likes to be praised; so, if we want to follow others by knowing the features and brand of a product, it makes a wise idea in purchasing the product. The tendency of becoming fashionable brings awareness in thinking broad and makes us fit in to perpetual trend. For instance, if everybody buying iPhone, that itself is a great example that to show our interest and profound investigation in buying it.
To conclude, humans are social animals that carve appreciation and acceptance. Following others to become fashionable brings confidence and boost our potentiality; even more earns more popularity amongst the crowd. Finally, everyone is emancipated to buy what they need based on their financial status, which shows their interest in upgrading to latest fashion ill over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'imitate the latest'.
Suggestion: imitate the latest
...ng trends; moreover, they are trying to imitate latest fashion. I completely agree with this i...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
..., everyone is enthusiastic in upgrading to latest fashion; besides, being influenced by p...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ine shopping sites are making this even more easier. Most of the youngsters are interested ...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...which shows their interest in upgrading to latest fashion ill over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83951288244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.938709178 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.2 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171357196517 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552703042166 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027043889251 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935629764093 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00797383993341 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.