Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are many countries around the world and the challenges being faced by each country are common. As, there is a significant growth in population and pollution everywhere we can say this as a perpetual process.
Over the ten years India will have to deal with some of the critical problems like education, unemployment and environment.
Education is becoming critically important for an individual. The families below poverty line are not able to afford to send their children to school because of their financial status. Instead they send their children to earn daily wages, who is supposed to be in school in that age. To overcome this government, need to bring awareness moreover, provide free education to the poor.
As, unemployment is the major issue in present world. But if the government is being oblivious towards this then the current situation might become too worse. Many graduates are passing their time without work. Moreover, they become a burden to their family. The government must provide some employment opportunities like giving subsidies to initiate small-scale industries and home-made products industries.
Due, to uncontrolled population and extensive use of automobiles leads to hazardous pollution. Some people used to use bicycles for shorter distance in the past. Now-a-days we are not even seeing them. Deforestation is the major cause of this which results in ozone depletion followed by skin diseases. Many of the countries are suffering with these problems now. Uncontrolled use of automobiles and cutting off trees in the upcoming years will trigger to perilous circumstances. This cannot be eradicated but, controlled to some extent by using bicycles for shorter distance and can go by foot if the distance is minimal and on priority needs reduce deforestation.
To recapitulate, If the world is protected then everyone can lead a tension free life. However, government alone cannot do this in one go, each individual need to take an initiative to ascertain for well-being of nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Instead,
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...provide free education to the poor. As, unemployment is the major issue in pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32608695652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95544665719 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0257529454 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242007653864 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614876614001 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075266586579 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124780652074 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775994909649 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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