Many individuals believe that taking ample rest and sleeping in their free time are the best ways to relax their bodies. On the other hand some argue that inculcating in extra-circular activities like outdoor games makes them feel refreshed.Do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals believe that taking ample rest and sleeping in their free time are the best ways to relax their bodies. On the other hand some argue that inculcating in extra-circular activities like outdoor games makes them feel refreshed. In my opinion, I strongly agree that activities like sports and games rejuvenate our body and mind.
Nowadays in this busy schedule, everyone are mostly spending their time in their workplace and they get some leisure time rarely; Moreover, some choose to relax their body by taking a nap just to relieve from stress. Sometimes this makes them to become lazy and tends to opt for sleep when they get some time. In a recent study, it is proven that most of the men choose to fall asleep at times they feel bored with their work.
Due to the changes in of lifestyle and unhealthy food habits, most of the us are prone to perilous health conditions. In this regard it is majorly important to lead a fit and clean life; however, playing games like football, badminton etc. not only keeps us fit but also, improves our well-being. For example, a person who plays badminton for a hour a day is more healthier and pressure free than a person who sleeps 8 hours per day. Hence, this shows that it is vital for each individual to invest some time in sports rather than sleeping.
In conclusion, I recommend that to deal with day-to-day stress and pressure at workplace or even at study environment it is highly important for each one to involve in extracurricular activities which balances their life. Finally, sufficient amount of time is required for everyone everyday for their recreation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ample, a person who plays badminton for a hour a day is more healthier and pressu...
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Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...who plays badminton for a hour a day is more healthier and pressure free than a person who sle...
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Line 6, column 283, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...amount of time is required for everyone everyday for their recreation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81138790036 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58855642374 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6556847167 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418468504062 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146401061143 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178478103006 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285747647685 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.291053523933 0.056905535591 511% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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