You received a letter from a friend who asked for a recommendation letter from you for the job that he she is applying for Write a letter to the manager explain how well you know this person describe how this person work why you think this person is suita

Essay topics:

You received a letter from a friend who asked for a recommendation letter from you for the job that he/she is applying for. Write a letter to the manager:
• explain how well you know this person
• describe how this person work
• why you think this person is suitable for the job.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the proposal to a job opening at our company for Senior Accountant designation. I have a friend John Mathews who is well versed in accounting industry.
Mr. John has a Master’s degree in Accounting and Business from USS, in Kolkata. We have worked together in the same accounting firm for almost a decade. He is holding nearly 20 years of experience in this field; moreover, worked for 3 major Member firms around the world. His experience itself speaks that he has sound knowledge and professionalism; besides, he is dedicated and adheres to organizational policies. He profoundly impressed clients which made them to report his competency.
I feel John is apt for our company to this position because, after our discussion last week regarding some help to find a right person for this vacancy. As, our organization is launching a new branch in next month. I immediately thought of him and believe that he best fits in this role.
Undoubtedly, I insist him for this position; moreover, his intelligence and logical methods of accounting helps our company the best.
I hope my recommendation will be considered.
Thanking you,
James.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o find a right person for this vacancy. As, our organization is launching a new br...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, regarding, so, well, i feel, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06323852519 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656565656566 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0584450558 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284909281572 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833210293295 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603606596386 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121463975695 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590534503704 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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