Dear Ride,
Hope this letter finds you radiant health, and the best spirits in your life. I am writing this letter because I am arranging reunion party of the Cambridge school batch 2004.
It has been long time since 14 years, we had busiest in our life just like studies, jobs and business. So, I had decided I will arrange reunion party at PC Hotel karachi. This is best place for gathering. We can easily reviving our nostalgic memory here. I also arrange goumat food and DJ. We can do dance on the beat of music.
I would like to tell you, It is a really difficult task for me to invite everyone in our batch. However, I have done my responsibility with full of love. Even, I am sure that we will do enjoy, fun and frolic in this party. This is best way for communication and interaction.
Furthermore, I want to tell you I have done my MBA, at Karachi university. Now, I am working in MCB Bank as a service quality analysis. So, I am workaholic person. I am arranging this event just because of I miss my school life as well as my friends also.
I m waiting for your positive response.
Yours friend,
Asma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r life. I am writing this letter because I am arranging reunion party of the Camb...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...So, I had decided I will arrange reunion party at PC Hotel karachi. This is best ...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...eunion party at PC Hotel karachi. This is best place for gathering. We can easily revi...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'revive'
Suggestion: revive
...best place for gathering. We can easily reviving our nostalgic memory here. I also arra...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. We can easily reviving our nostalgic memory here. I also arrange goumat food ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...joy, fun and frolic in this party. This is best way for communication and interaction. ...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
... person. I am arranging this event just because of I miss my school life as well as my frien...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ss my school life as well as my friends also. I m waiting for your positive respo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41148325359 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51766497691 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.13402061856 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8232357805 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.2222222222 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6111111111 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135403533353 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394902044883 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440424717756 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750327121959 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421609780627 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.11 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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