Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologize for missing the meeting
2. Explain what happen
3. Say what you will do to compensate
Dear Mr. Pederson,
I am writing this letter to apologise for the absence of recent meeting. I am fully aware that the meeting agenda, reformation of organization structure, is important for company development.
In the early morning of the meeting day, I slipped and fell down in the bathroom of my house and my head hit with the corner bathtub. I was feeling pain after the accident and at the same time, I cannot stop bleeding from the wound. Therefore I called ambulance and received the appropriate treatments. Even though the bleeding stopped, specialist suggested to stay in hospital for a day to recover from dizziness.
I am really disappointed myself for not being able to attend the meeting. I will check and review with Linda on the meeting minutes and will follow up the necessary actions as soon as possible. I promise that my absence will not affect the organizational protocol and targets.
I would like to say sorry for all the inconvenient causes and hope you can forgive me.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Aye
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... I cannot stop bleeding from the wound. Therefore I called ambulance and received the app...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested staying'.
Suggestion: suggested staying
...though the bleeding stopped, specialist suggested to stay in hospital for a day to recover from d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... necessary actions as soon as possible. I promise that my absence will not affect...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...organizational protocol and targets. I would like to say sorry for all the inc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93714285714 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80407866203 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6047444484 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206390724723 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652535964386 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513925075265 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119074468524 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508952781845 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.