Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
These days, there is a controversial debate between people about age discrimination. While it is possible to claim that age discrimination in workplace is ubiquitous, my view is that age discrimination should be avoided at all cost. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
First of all, there are several reasons why age discrimination is bad for workplace. One of them is that discrimination is against the human right. In addition, most of the discrimination happens with elder workers who serviced long period in the company. It should also be taken into account that experience from older workers are invaluable asset for the company and company management team should consider carefully to make use of their experience.
Those who supported age discrimination have a different view and say it will actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that the physical performance of elder workers cannot compare to the young workers. Then, there are concerns about promotion for newcomers that is often influenced by the existing elder workers.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that a common trend of work place discrimination is a negative development of our society. I would strongly suggest that governments should take action all workplace discrimination by law.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18018018018 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11849680449 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3451815544 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185100329135 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621534722941 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556825361972 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108407713354 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436578710664 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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