Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
These days, there is a controversial debate between people about age discrimination. While it is possible to claim that age discrimination in workplace is ubiquitous, my view is that age discrimination should be avoided at all cost. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
First of all, there are several reasons why age discrimination is bad for workplace. One of them is that discrimination is against the human right. In addition, most of the discrimination happened with elder workers who serviced long period in the company. It should also be taken into account that experience from older workers are invaluable asset for the company and company management team must consider carefully to make use of their experience.
Those who supported age discrimination, have a different view and say it will actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that the physical performance of elder workers cannot compare to the young workers. Then, there are concerns about promotion for newcomers that is often influenced by the existing elder workers. For instance, in japan, a young fresher cannot be promoted if there is a senior elder worker despite of good performance.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that a common trend of work place age discrimination is a negative development of our society. I would strongly suggest that governments should take action age discrimination by law.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12345679012 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1037919872 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5258052722 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181340799179 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614571084419 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646540698579 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116906816124 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758364594388 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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