Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Mike,
Thanks for borrowing your scientific calculator. It is pretty much helpful to finish my assignment. However, I damaged the calculator unfortunately and I would like to apologize for the thing happened.
I accidentally spilled coffee over the calculator and I suppose that the cause of damage is mainly due to electrical shock circuit. As you know, I’m addicted to coffee and every time when I work on the assignment, I keep a coffee mug on the study table. On that day, I was carelessly hit the mug with my right hand and the coffee spilled all over the calculator.
I feel really sad for your loss. I’ve checked with professional serviceman from Casio and he informed that it cannot be fixed. I will buy a calculator with same specification as a replacement. I wish you can satisfy with the replacement unit.
Again I would like to say sorry for the inconvenient causes.
Your friend,
Yan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, i feel, i suppose, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92993630573 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96819387085 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4011730816 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163519130657 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630977023517 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579281706241 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814403853696 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334229787839 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.