Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue
Dear Mike,
Thanks for borrowing your scientific calculator. It is pretty much helpful to finish my assignment. However, I damaged the calculator unfortunately and I would like to apologize for the thing happened.
I accidentally spilled coffee over the calculator and I suppose that the cause of damage is mainly due to electrical shock circuit. As you know, I am addicted to coffee and every time when I work on the assignment, I keep a coffee mug on the study table. On that day, I was carelessly hit the mug with my right hand and the coffee spilled all over the calculator.
I feel really sad for your loss. I have checked with professional serviceman from Casio and he informed that it cannot be fixed. I will buy a calculator with same specification as a replacement. I wish you can satisfy with the replacement unit.
Again I would like to say sorry for the inconvenient causes.
Your friend,
Yan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...or. I feel really sad for your loss. Ive checked with professional serviceman an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, i feel, i suppose, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97206476507 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2948813803 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154875395195 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607683143761 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598255161425 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774660666024 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338905440676 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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