During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In you letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
Let me reintroduce myself. My name is Yan Naung Aye and we met in the plane that flew from Yangon to Singapore last week. It was very nice to talk with you during the trip.
I am writing this letter to express my interest on the opportunity that you mentioned. Since resigning from my last job as restaurant supervisor, I am actively seeking for a new opportunity in restaurant management role.
Please let me present my experiences in restaurant industry. Firstly, I worked as a waiter in Amara Restaurant for 3 years and then, promoted as restaurant supervisor. After 8 years of working in this restaurant, I quitted to find the new challenges in my career. In terms of working style, I am a hardworking team player who fully understands a restaurant operation from head to tail.
If an opportunity is given, I could help improving your restaurant and solving the internal operational problems that you have described during our conversation.
Thanks for your attention into this matter and I will look forward for your reply.
You Sincerely,
Mr. Yan Naung Aye
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...f an opportunity is given, I could help improving your restaurant and solving the interna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95675675676 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96191555493 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4984778982 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127884640825 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552762529234 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064915935862 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673652387998 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411407101016 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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