You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.
Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter,
1. explain that you would like to apply for the job
2. give some details of any relevant experience that you have
3. specify the days and times that would suite you
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest on the part-time job opening in your good restaurant which was advertised on today’s local newspaper.
Please let me present my experience on the food industry. Firstly, I have worked as a waiter in Amara Restaurant for two years and then, promoted as an assistance supervisor. Although I love the job, I resigned from this Restaurant after three years later because of my intention to seek new challenges in the career life. Looking at the job advertisement from your good restaurant, I believe that it will absolutely suite my style of working.
Personally, I am a hardworking team player. I will be available for the job during the weekdays after 3pm and the whole weekends. It will be nice if we can have a coffee talk to explore more about nature of the job and your expectation on this position.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Mr. Yan Aye
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you. Best Regards, Mr. Yan Aye
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85975609756 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8728443539 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4625115223 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185071580961 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596115049828 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582386835936 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119179029418 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664195224242 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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