Some people think that it is better to be self-employed while others argue that working for a company is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although there are some people who believe that self-employment is the best option for them, others take the view that working as employees is better. In my opinion, it is better for them to start own businesses.
On one side of the argument, there are people who would argue that serving for employers can create a better life. This is because working for an organization offers a steady income and less risk of business failure. This risk free income allows them to plan the future ahead and have a good control on the life. In addition, workers are generally less stressful than owners in a business. The main reason for this is that unlike the owners, they only need to take responsibility on their own duties. As a result, this benefits the mental well-being and leads them to live longer.
Despite the above arguments, I am of the position that being self-employed could benefit people and countries. Indeed, one reason for believing this is that flexible work hours could be achieved by self-employment and this offers an obvious advantage for people who cannot fit into 8-hour work routine. Furthermore, if the self-started companies get profits, they do not need to share them with the others. Therefore, owning a business is financially more profitable. Additionally, business development of a country is highly influenced by small and medium enterprises. If everyone starts to work on their own businesses, the number of these enterprises will be increased so it will support the growth of the business in the country.
In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that self-employment can offer the best results for people. Given this situation, it is recommended that people should try to find a way to start the own businesses to support the financial stability and development of business society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91659480697 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9180345449 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336760730766 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103294804989 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930888427513 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221876253546 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099051106152 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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