Some people feel that success lies in achieving professional and economic targets, while others say that success lies in spending quality time with family and friends. What is your opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about success. While it is possible to claim that achieving professional and economic target is success in life, my view is that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why spending time with family and friend can be defined as success. One of them is the happiness which cannot be achieved with money or career development. It can also be argued that happiness is not related to success. It should also be taken into account that success without happiness is meaningless.
Those who argue for achieving professional and economic targets as success, have a different point of view and says that it is actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that money can buy anything and money can only be earned by professional or economic achievements. Then, there are concerned about many rich people who are not happy in their life.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that investing times on family and friends are meaningful to define the success of a life. I would strongly recommend to those who is chasing for success that they should spend more free time with family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that investing times on family and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88687782805 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61748181897 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8212698409 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278591608958 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104879358086 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637805679811 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168610539762 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023881595142 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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