Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
These days, there is a controversial debate between people about the relationship between success and places where successful people grew up. While it is possible to claim that success is a combination of talent, passion and hardworking, my view is that environment that they grew up also play an important role in definition of success. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing the region effects on successful people.
First of all, there are several reasons why environment surroundings are important for a success. One of them is that the supportive infrastructures of the region are essential for a successful person. For instance, Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft, will not be able to create Microsoft if he grew up in one of the Africa’s country because of the lack of infrastructure. Therefore, background infrastructures are vital part of a success.
Secondly, success is influenced by the society of the region. It can be claimed that society drives the passion of successful person. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg, founder of Facebook, will be a mediocre person if he did not have a chance to study in Harvard University and guide by competent lecturers. Therefore, surrounding society is one of the factor to consider in success.
As there are strong evidences on the statements, my opinion is that native regions have a high influence on a person success. I would strongly suggest that parents should pay attention to the environment that their children grew up in order for them to success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12518077079 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4781182792 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246458411518 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10797501941 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102294832408 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15823582455 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036434623187 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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