A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear Matt,
I am delighted to see your warm invitation. This idea is exciting. However, my work commitments cannot make this possible unfortunately.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new job as Naval Architect with a salvage company. As you may aware that my job scope includes 24 hours standby for emergency response. Most of the time, I'll need to travel to an operation site within an hour of notice. During upcoming holiday, I’m on duty and I won’t be able to visit you.
Can you please let me know when you’re available next time? I’m seriously looking for a break from the city life and I’d love to come to stay at your place. I’ll bring my wife along with me and she'd certainly enjoy to meet you and your kids. Let’s do some crazy stuffs.
I look forward to hearing for you.
Yours,
Yan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Matt, Im delighted to see your warm invitation. ...
^^
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...emergency response. Most of the time, I needs to travel to an operation site within 1...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70120607504 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.801418439716 0.622605031667 129% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7097016693 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.3076923077 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8461538462 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157826669754 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051755240533 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558785578671 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107106755364 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338066095146 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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