Many small, local shops are closing at they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Increasing the popularity of the malls creates a competitive market for the local shops and some of the shops are shutting down without able to withstand the competition. Normally, the big supermarkets have a huge financial background that they can knock out any of the small shops from the market. In this essay, the consequences of the decrease in the number of convenient stores and solutions for protecting the local stores will be explained.
Firstly, the closing of locals shops which results in the jobless citizens, is not a positive improvement for our society. As the number of jobless citizens increases, there will have a decrease in number of taxpayers which will, in turn, affect the economics of a country. Furthermore, since the market is solely controlled by the supermarkets, they can monopolize the price of the product and the society will suffer from it.
There are two methods to support locally based stores, an important part of society, with the help of governments. First of all, authorities should implement a tax scheme for companies with different incomes to balance the competition. Moreover, the government can also encourage the banks to promote a special loan scheme for local shops as a long-term financial support so that supermarkets cannot easily eliminate the local stores.
To conclude, although the popularity of supermarkets cannot be denied, local small convenient stores are still playing an important role for society. Therefore, the government need to protect them by creating a tax scheme and special loan scheme for a balanced market of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...petitive market for the local shops and some of the shops are shutting down without able to...
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... for a balanced market of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23166023166 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90022306193 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5736931401 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190979382724 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757996683337 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512609814129 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116544612903 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042165825797 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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