Dear Jacob,
Hope, your and your family are at pinkest of health. I received your letter last week. I can't express how happy i was to hear from you. Congratulations on your new job.
Thank you for inviting me to come stay with you on my next vacation. Please do accept my apologies, as it is not possible, due to my prior commitments. Me and my girlfriend have planned a trip to Bali. We both are excitedly looking forward to it. I hope you understand, but my next period of leaves start by mid July. I will be more than happy to come see you then. Maybe we can plan something together.
I will be glad to visit you soon. Hoping to hear from you soon. My kindest regards to you and your family.
Your's Sincerely,
Nelson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jacob, Hope, your and your family are at pinkes...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...th. I received your letter last week. I cant express how happy i was to hear from yo...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ter last week. I cant express how happy i was to hear from you. Congratulations o...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Congratulations on your new job. Thank you for inviting me to come stay w...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aybe we can plan something together. I will be glad to visit you soon. Hoping...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 596.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3503649635 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47398957837 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686131386861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5812330652 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 39.7333333333 76.5299724578 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.13333333333 16.8248392259 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31023104139 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105742452285 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848628052797 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207742955023 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307641365391 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.6 8.37731958763 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.17 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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