Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
dealing with crime is always a difficult task. there will forever be a difference of opinion, like the above said topic. Whether to increase a prison term or find other solutions in tackling criminal activities all depends on the nature of act.
some of us are of the view that if we increase the tenure of sentences, we would be able to reduce crime. when we are aware by doing this thing we will land in a bigger term in jail, probably one might not do the illegal activity. Thus reducing the menance in the society. it can be very effective, when the message is spread and everyone are aware of the circumstances of their action. Campaigns should be done inculcating all the dire punishments they can come across for comitting a henious crime. While on the other hand people are of the opinion that there are even more effective methods to deal with the same. According to few the best way to tackle this would be educating all. First crime never pays and any aforementioned act will only to lead to punishment which might hamper an individuals growth in professional and personal life. Many believe instead of raising the capital punishment it will be better if we start investing in more safety. Such as installing cctvs at all places, making it mandatory to have a community gathering in a town hall or any appropriate location, to reinstill the importance of a safe and secure nieghbouhoods. To teach youngsters whatever means of corruption will move in only putting them behind bars.
I would foresee a better and safer enviornment rather than punishing anyone. How it can be applied is by having a clear statement or commitment by local authorites that any infringement would only head towards a serious action. inculcating through media, advertisements are a few methods that can be adopted. Unfortunately if it so happens that an individual has done some infringement he or she will be accountable for their deeds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, thus, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 4.92783505155 345% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 937.175257732 172% => OK
No of words: 332.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85542168675 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83803358083 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 290.88556701 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0386823908 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128481687052 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419557936309 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474995058704 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769565116195 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473169928843 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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