Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
crime never pays. Many feel there is a need for a fixed punishment for each type of criminal activity, while others don't agree. heinous activities can lead to unprecedented circumstances.
To a lot of them it is justified to punish to criminals for their act, and sentence them accordingly. they believe that if someone has committed a theft, they should be accounted for by giving an appropriate correction time. As this would increase the tenure spent in jail. will start to reduce crime rates. Extending the term as per what a person has done will effect them personally and professionally. No two activities should be rendered the same treatment as it would be unfair, more so a grievant crime, would go unserved justice. Whilst other's believe, an act of unprecedented nature meant to harm intentionally, should be judge according to the situation. Wether its a petty theft or a murder. He or she should be judged at what prompted them to do so. Some situations can be arised only due to self preservation. As to someone is trying to kill them, but to prevent themselves they accidentally kill the opposite person. All of this will lead to a better sentencing. Things done with clear intent to harm or cause malice to the the society, should never go without a greater prison term. Perhaps, crimes done out of unwarranted situations around, for eg. a thief trying to rob something of a human. An individual in this scenario might be protecting himself or her, to prevent the robbery, although, accidentally injures the robber and is sent behind bars. In this scenario the motive and why this person did this, should be taken into account.
Thus to say all crimes should be brought to justice is correct. Not all are done with a clear mindset to harm or cause a menance. Therefore, every minute action, situation and the motive should always be considered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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crime never pays. Many feel there is a need for a fixed punishment ...
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...type of criminal activity, while others dont agree. heinous activities can lead to u...
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...an lead to unprecedented circumstances. To a lot of them it is justified to puni...
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...eir act, and sentence them accordingly. they believe that if someone has committed a...
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... giving an appropriate correction time. As this would increase the tenure spent in...
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...ould increase the tenure spent in jail. will start to reduce crime rates. Extending ...
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...term as per what a person has done will effect them personally and professionally. No ...
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... meant to harm intentionally, should be judge according to the situation. Wether its ...
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...this, should be taken into account. Thus to say all crimes should be brought to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81734998491 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1337569759 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2173913043 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9130434783 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36994746184 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868168511609 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747018963852 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233703781042 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441990293978 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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