You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend, in your letter.
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest type of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to receive your letter of seeking advice on the choice between attending college and working and I’d like to suggest to find a job.
It’ll be a nightmare for you to continue studying since you don’t enjoy student life. Personally, I believe that you like to explore new things and this is your chance to see how people work in the real world. Furthermore, you can build the team working and communication skills which are crucial for a successful career, by working in an organization.
When looking for a job, I’d also suggest you to work on technology sector. Nowadays, everybody is using computers and this sector will surely improve in future. If possible, you can try to find for the computer serviceman role. The job scope of this position will involve dealing with client that is important to keep up your communication skill and it’ll also be inline with your passion on working with computer parts.
I hope that my suggestions can help you.
Yours Sincerely,
Yan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest finding'.
Suggestion: suggest finding
...ollege and working and I'd like to suggest to find a job. It'll be a nightmare for...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ers and this sector will surely improve in future. If possible, you can try to find for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71608095009 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4133570762 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185962168218 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773308987033 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037307714523 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114388353707 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370426447759 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.