Essay A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,Thank him/her for the invitationExplain why you cannot come.
Dear Matt,
I am delighted to see your warm invitation. This idea is exciting. However, my work commitments cannot make this possible unfortunately.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new job as Naval Architect with a salvage company. As you may aware that my job scope includes 24 hours standby for emergency response. Most of the time, I'll need to travel to an operation site within an hour of notice. During upcoming holiday, I’m on duty and I won’t be able to visit you.
Can you please let me know when you’re available next time? I’m seriously looking for a break from the city life and I’d love to come to stay at your place. I’ll bring my wife along with me and she'd certainly enjoy to meet you and your kids. Let’s do some crazy stuffs.
I look forward to hearing for you.
Yours, Yan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy meeting'.
Suggestion: enjoy meeting
...y wife along with me and shed certainly enjoy to meet you and your kids. Let's do some c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88741721854 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6766930641 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76821192053 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5361706189 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.7692307692 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6153846154 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194760004149 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668838284538 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587556366432 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122447456042 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04293851967 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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