write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.1. Apologise for missing the meeting2.explain what happened3.say what you will do to compensate

Essay topics:

write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologise for missing the meeting
2.explain what happened
3.say what you will do to compensate

Hi Rahul,

I am writing to apologize, as I have missed to attend the meeting which was held yesterday.

I was on my way to office, when I had received a call from my mother stating my father fell down from the stairs and got serious injuries. This is the reason I went back to my home so that I can take care of my father and take him to the hospital. He has got severe head injuries.

I understand I have missed up the important point to be discussed in the meeting. However, I will ensure I will come early tomorrow morning and discuss the point of the meeting which I had missed due to missing the meeting.

I hope you will forgive my absence and continue to guide me in future.

Your's sincerely,
Vandana Mankotia

Votes
Average: 3.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'missed attending'.
Suggestion: missed attending
... I am writing to apologize, as I have missed to attend the meeting which was held yesterday. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... missed due to missing the meeting. I hope you will forgive my absence and con...
^^
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ive my absence and continue to guide me in future. Yours sincerely, Vandana Mankotia ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 605.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41605839416 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41902259341 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2935665854 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.625 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134065823896 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586341514267 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549034098438 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889590355066 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546725980491 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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