write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.1. Apologise for missing the meeting2.explain what happened3.say what you will do to compensate

Essay topics:

write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologise for missing the meeting
2.explain what happened
3.say what you will do to compensate

Hi Rahul,

I am writing to apologize, as I have missed attending the meeting held yesterday.

I was on my way to the office, when I had received a call from my mother, stating my father fell from the stairs and got severe injuries. Due to which, I went back to my home so that I can take care of my father, and take him to the hospital. He has got severe head injuries.

I understand I have missed up the vital points discussed at the meeting. However, I will ensure I will come early tomorrow morning and explain the points which I had missed due to not attending the meeting.

I Hope you will forgive my absence and continue to guide me in future.

Thanks and Regards,
Vandana Mankotia

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d due to not attending the meeting. I Hope you will forgive my absence and con...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ive my absence and continue to guide me in future. Thanks and Regards, Vandana Mankot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 130.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45384615385 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45046789398 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9594372252 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.375 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121627698565 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534391876873 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054188958528 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917392035595 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562548638979 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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