Write a letter to your English speaking friend to invite him/her to see a movie about your country. In your letter say
– Describe the movie.
– Why would he/she find it interesting?
– Suggest an arrangement to watch the movie together.
Dear Mohan,
I hope you and your family are all well! It was so wonderful to spend time with you during my stay at your home in the last summer. I heard that you are coming to Hyderabad in the last week of March for attending a business seminar. I am eagerly waiting to meet you up.
I am making some plans to cherish your moments with me in Hyderabad when you are here. I am booking movie tickets to watch a movie named Gandhi, which narrates the story of my country's freedom struggle with the British government. As you are very fond of history, I thought this film will make you very happy and fills you with the voyage of the Indian freedom struggle.
I will pick you up from the hotel after completion of your seminar. I will be there by 5:00 pm so that we will reach the theatre on time. After that, I have planned a dinner together with our childhood friends, then we will go to my home to spend time with family.
I look forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Suresh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...am eagerly waiting to meet you up. I am making some plans to cherish your mo...
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Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with me in Hyderabad when you are here. I am booking movie tickets to watch a mov...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30481283422 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16582161435 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614973262032 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9125872765 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1818181818 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087325113724 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357085840669 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415944098445 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561926578719 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019352410418 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.