Write a thank you letter to your friend about the guidebook he she gave you for your vacation and say Describe your vacation How did you use the guidebook When and where will you return the guidebook to your friend

Essay topics:

Write a thank you letter to your friend about the guidebook he/she gave you for your vacation and say

– Describe your vacation.
– How did you use the guidebook?
– When and where will you return the guidebook to your friend?

Dear Deepak,

I hope this letter finds you in good spirit. First of all, I would like to thank you for the amazing guidebook, which you have given me before going to the vacation. Because of your guiding, we have enjoyed the trip very well.

We went to Kerala, which is famously known as 'Gods Own Country', in the last week of May. Firstly, we travelled from Hyderabad to Trivandrum by Flight. Then we have taken a local taxi and travelled through the picturesque landscapes, beautiful backwaters and the coconut trees.

The guidebook came in handy to plan the whole tour. We have planned everything before leaving for the destination, with the help of your book. We have drawn step by step plan, from booking the flight tickets, taxi and route of journey perfectly, so we don’t need to check back on everything later.

Finally, I am coming to your place on next week for a business conference, I will hand over the guidebook book at that time.
Once again, thank you very much for your help, I will bring the vacation photos to show you.

With love,
Suresh

Votes
Average: 9.3 (5 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73544973545 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41666340866 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9809893967 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276349640122 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965023875167 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106279565364 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177105187511 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130731229193 0.0580467560999 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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