Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sugar is the sweet substance produced from sugarcane, the increased consumption of sweet substances causes many health problems. Some people argued that the government should be responsible for reducing the sugar intake, while others believe that people should take of themselves. This essay agrees that people themselves should take care of their eating habits.
People should be self-responsible for their eating habits. Although the sugar intake is essential for the body to work efficiently, excessive consumption leads to the health problems like diabetes, obesity etc..Diabetes is a disease which leads to many complications like diabetic retinopathy and diabetic inspidus. People should do physical exercise to reduce the effects of the heavy intake of sugar. According to the survey of Times, persons who do the rigorous exercise leads a happy life compared to who did not.
Frequent consumption of the sugar is due to the wide availability of the sugar and its products. The government should take measures to control the intake of sugar by imposing huge taxes on sugar and related substances. This leads to an increase in the price of the product thus reduces consumption. Authorities should also conduct campaigns to create awareness among the population about the adverse effects caused by the excessive consumption of sugar. Although the Government is making effects to reduce sugar consumption, it is the self-responsibility of the people to control their eating habits. For example, a recent study conducted by the Diabetic Association of India revealed that levying taxes and creating awareness constitute only 30% of the reduction, whereas remaining 70% of the reduction is due to healthy eating habits followed by the individuals are the reasons for curbing the problems associated with sugar consumption.
In conclusion, sugar consumption in less quantity is beneficial for the health and in large amount leads to many health issues. Although the government is taking measures to curb the problem related to this issue, it is the personal responsibility of the people to control their eating habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9939087227 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478787878788 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.108931116 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565249587828 0.244688304435 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20632434518 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118013630355 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365580363589 0.151304729494 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757644605555 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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