Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sucrose consumption has increased these days due to wider use of energy drinks, colas, milkshakes and processed fruit juices. Few believe that authorities should regulate this intake but others believe self-restraint is best practice to avoid potential health risks. This essay will discuss both the views and my opinion.
Some people believe that governments have to regulate sugar intake, like they do with drugs. According to the online survey conducted by a famous magazine, 80% of respondents feel that governments have to take serious measures to cut down sugar consumption by its public. For instance, when sucrose content was regulated in a small country like Bhutan, the public has better control over their health. Therefore, it is advisable to regulate the sugar content in processed foods or drinks. However, even if governments control sucrose intake, people can still scout ways to consume high sugar, by adding them externally to the food or drinks they buy, this would render the government’s control futile, isn’t that true?
While some people believe that individuals should limit their sucrose intake voluntarily. This is the best possible solution for good health. If governments control sugar intake, then a large section of people would feel that governments are snatching away their freedom. For instance, governments couldn’t able to control nicotine and alcohol consumption in the past, although they are harmful to public health. According to research conducted by university of Connecticut, any bad habit that is self-abstained will be fruitful, rather than controlling the habit with authority.
This essay has discussed both views regarding sugar intake by people of a nation. In my opinion people should control sugar intake by themselves. Government's interference into these affairs are not advisable and even if governments regulate, the chances of actual control would be slim. Which will collapse the whole purpose of having good health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ontrol futile, isn't that true? While some people believe that individuals sh...
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...hances of actual control would be slim. Which will collapse the whole purpose of havi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52287581699 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83328621682 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3054879488 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406536787553 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135456858017 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090377170064 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257556459695 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720091457963 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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