In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In the recent times, most of the countries peoples are becoming obese and their fitness is decreasing drastically. In this essay, we will discuss the root cause of these problems and methods to mitigate this problem.
Firstly, the main reason for the obesity is the consumption of heavy junk food. This type of food is not easily digestible by our digestive system; because of this reason undigested food is converted in to fat and deposited as visceral fat in the body. This accumulation of fat leads to the obesity in the people. As per the survey of world health organization, 90% of the obesity population is due to the consumption of high-fat food, and remaining 10% is due to the genetic disorders, which makes them susceptible to fat accumulation. In order to eradicate this problem, the government should levy high taxes on the junk food, which makes the food costlier, so that people cannot afford to buy the junk food, hence, reduction in the consumption will be observed. This leads to reduced problems related to obese.
Finally, the reason for the deterioration of the health and fitness of the people is due to the reduced physical activity. In this busy life, no one is having the time to spend on the physical exercises like walking, jogging and cycling etc. A recent survey indicates that people are not able to allocate the time to physical exercise due to their work pressures and busy schedule. To improve the health and fitness of the people, the government should encourage the local communities to build a community centre with facilities like jogging, walking, swimming and other outdoor activities etc. The corporate should provide the discounts to its employees to encourage the involvement in the physical exercise and they can provide the gym facilities in the companies to its employees. According to the survey in Wipro, their employee performance is increased 10 fold after facilitating the gym on the company premises.
To conclude, the government should impose heavy taxes on junk food and encourage local communities to build the exercise facilities to improve the health and fitness of its generation. Also, the employers need to provide subsidized gym facilities to improve the wellness among its employees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07277628032 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79602795421 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463611859838 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4993907649 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106901967384 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393359468938 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364485769227 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753583389445 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454199469796 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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