In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Today, people in various countries are well aware of the problems caused by the overweight and taking care by following diet to be in shape. But in few nations it's going in an opposite way, people are suffering with over weight issues due to lack of maintaining their fitness and neglecting their health.
One country I would probably mention when comes to the overweight issues is America. The majority of people in the states are suffering from obesity. A survey conducted by New York Times in the year 2018 stated, the average weight of an American is around 75 kilograms and it increases about 0.5 percent every five-year term. For example, my friend from USA use to be around 55 kilograms in the 2011 and now in 2019 he weighs around 75. I always suggest him some tips to follow which helps him to stay fit all the time.
The main reason for being overweight is their diet. Many of these countries regularly have junk food which is oil rich and contains a high amount of cholesterol leads to the cardiac arrest and various types of cancers. For example, my relative who was born in Saudi often eats fast proceed food and last year he got a sudden stroke and expired. Doctor's given the explanation of his death is due to his overweight. The government of such countries shouldn't encourage the companies which offer junk. Along with that, they strictly need to implement the laws on the existing brand's. They should create fitness related ad-campaigns, marathons and include all the necessary exercises for the students in their school and college curriculum. Conducting fitness related competition's among them may also bring changes in the people's mindset towards health.
To conclude, the people in the countries whose average weight of a person increases has to strictly follow the diet rules and should exercise regularly. Respective country heads should seriously think about the overweight issues and should resolve from its root level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96048632219 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51323489297 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6871937718 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218776835646 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613574431002 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047929703812 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136445150188 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444220339206 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.