You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say
– Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute.
– What problems have you encountered with parking?
– What are your recommendations to solve them?
Hello Mr. Peter,
My name is Suresh, working as a senior software engineer at Wipro software solutions located on the third floor of the Imperial Buildings. I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about the parking problems in our office building.
I live in the downtown area and I am coming to the office daily by bicycle to avoid the traffic congestion. I am using the bicycle to reduce the pollution created by use of motor vehicles. Although the bicycle occupies less space, I am unable to find the parking place for it. As our building is crowded with software companies and also the parking is not organized, it is difficult to find the parking place for the bicycle. Due to this irregularity in the parking, I need to wait for over 2 hours to pick the cycle from the parking lot.
I would like to recommend to you, some alternatives to eradicate the parking issues in our building. First of all, organize the building parking area according to the space rented by the organizations. Secondly, encourage the use of eco-friendly vehicles, by providing the priority parking locations and finally, encourage the employees to commute to office daily using the public transport system.
I look forward to hearing back from you,
Yours faithfully,
Mr K Suresh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76318369852 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558035714286 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7289129279 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208992711954 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766989495018 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337264044869 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10258257578 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400556501684 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.