Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to let you know my discomfort about parking my bicycle in the space alloted to me.
After finishing annual health check-up at my office, doctor has suggested me include bicycle in my daily commute. For this reason, I have started using it from past couple of weeks. I start from home or at 8 am in the morning and return at 8 pm
However, when I come home the alloted car parking space not only get occupied by someone else's vehicle, but the premises also get locked. This compels me to park my bike outside which is really a hazardous situation for my bike. Furthermore, I have noticed my vehicle getting punctured intentionally by youngsters in society as their play ground get restricted due to my bike presence.
To solve this issue pragmatically, I think you can either send notices to our society members for not to park their four-wheeler there or provide my bike immunity in open field.
I hope you will understand my request. looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely
Prajwal M
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 86, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
...ple of weeks. I start from home or at 8 am in the morning and return at 8 pm However, when I c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
... I hope you will understand my request. looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sinc...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 56, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... understand my request. looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely Prajwal M...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64524919734 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1097284717 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134181628415 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599883417044 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406983331233 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729384908626 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408183459163 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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