Travel sector is contributing significantly to global economy nowadays and there are many economies which rely majorly on this sector. If things are not organized, tourism’s promotion can be detrimental for tourists’ spots. In my opinion, although there are minor risks such as theft of antiques and deterioration of nature, increase in trade and culture sharing are major positive aspects of it in the contemporary world.
One drawback with travel industry is that it can result in smuggling of antiques in the absence of adequate security. Usually, tourist friendly countries like Thailand give relaxation on frisking of passengers and this freedom may excite ill mentality people to carry out illegal jobs with maximum feasibility. Another negative aspect with leisure travel is that, it can exploit nature reserves. For instance, when people wish to dwell in core of sanctuary, portion of ecology needs to be chopped down to allow construction there. Because of this arrangement, environment get disturbed. However, with satisfactory security arrangement and strict nature conservation laws both problems can be solved.
One major benefit of tourism is that it plays a crucial role in development of trade. This is to say, along with every foreign visitor there is hidden opportunity to increase trade both internationally and locally for receiver country. For example, after arrival of tourist in non-home land, he inevitably starts doing business with local traders for many services such as food, commute, hospitality as well as currency exchange which goes without saying. Therefore, this way both the currencies get their chance in trading.
Another noticeable positive side of travelling sector is that is helps cultures to flourish outside its boundaries. Often culture remains limited to geographical limits, but human visits to new places lets it spread beyond those constrains. One good example of this; whenever we land in any foreign country, we can find at least one restaurant that serves our country cuisine. Therefore, cultural influence do not remain with its geographical confinement.
In conclusion, despite security threats and danger to ecology, benefits brought by vacation travel to the people are more beneficial. Thus, travel not only help business to grow but also help spreading arts
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to spread' or 'spread'.
Suggestion: to spread; spread
...nly help business to grow but also help spreading arts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51532033426 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91729773616 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654596100279 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0015109285 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.210526316 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935262584088 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278347940697 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333424477588 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482457391247 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307254743902 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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