Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to expresses my interest to accompany children in their school trip.
I am interested to go for this trip because I think I am the most appropriate candidate it. I am working as a psychologist for under 16 children from past several years, this brings me with hands on experience to tackle number of students. Therefore, I think Instead of getting panicked with their notorious actions, I will handle them subtly.
Besides my profession I also love travelling and I have already visited all the places that are planned in upcoming itinerary. It is certainly an advantageous condition that I will be able to explain about heritage sites well in details when we reach there. This way we will not only save our precious time to find local tour guide but also his professional fees.
I was wondering if could please detail me further about the trip, such as, number of students from each class and name of your school staff who will be going for this trip?
Looking forward to hearing from you shortly.
Yours sincerely,
Lara Tik.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shortly. Yours sincerely, Lara Tik.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5965947335 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728723404255 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1811179014 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143569109179 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528918730289 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501060482252 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714730155012 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512040298683 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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