While some people argue that cost of goods and services plays major role in decision making when buying them, I disagree with this opinion because apart from monetary concerns there are many other crucial deciding factors which may have potential role in final decision.
To begin with, cost of goods is not the most important thing to be taken to consideration while purchasing them. This is because our decisions may vary based on our actual needs and product sutaibility to our work style. For instance, news reporters would prefer to buy a phone, which may help them in capturing live telecast or record a conference even when they are not prepared to spot the show. In contrast, if they end up buying cost effective devices those are not integarted live recording capabilites, they may find it difficult complete their work. Thus, I personally think cost is just a number that can not define our needs.
Additionally, after getting hospitalised life of individuals cannot be compromised with money. I think living of human being is more important than that of money because once spent money can be earned again but once lost life cannot be rejuvenated. Therefore, for any reason medical treatment should not be cornered stating shortage of money.
In conclusion, although people think price of things and services are key to decision making, I think purpose and value of human life outweighs this concern. In fact, wise decision needs to be made when buying things, they should be used optimally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02788844622 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56144006813 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4893207848 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145184391888 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520010495141 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396350228091 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876425415692 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320319523261 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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