Write a letter to your friend to invite your friend as you are organizing a party for family.Explain why you are invitingTell him about your plansWhy his presence is important

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your friend to invite your friend as you are organizing a party for family.
Explain why you are inviting
Tell him about your plans
Why his presence is important

Dear John,
I hope you’re hale and hearty. I just wanted to invite you for a party I am organizing. As it’s been a long time since we last saw each other, I think this will be the best opportunity for us to meet again.
I am organizing this party in the occasion of my parents 25th Wedding Anniversary, which is on April 24th. We as a family would like to celebrate this day with our loved ones, and which is why I would like you to attend the party.
As you know, I am always excited about hosting parties, it would be no surprise to you knowing that I have planned a few activities for the event. The party would have a cake-cutting ceremony, ring exchange ceremony, and karaoke followed by dinner. I am also planning on the exquisite decorations for the hall where the event will take place.
Your presence would mean a lot to me and my family, as you are my best friend and my family loves you. Your attendance would make my parents feel special and elated.
Hope to see you soon.
Cheers,
Malvika

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42328042328 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4809455542 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0113699118 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250990820396 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845228028287 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720430721205 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127568665247 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575340641556 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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